tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8450543349448165337.post1896773062620518014..comments2023-02-27T12:58:29.826-05:00Comments on Unpublished For a Reason: Della, Part 2Hannah Khttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00849529277859991156noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8450543349448165337.post-82091689503796765532014-08-08T13:22:12.634-04:002014-08-08T13:22:12.634-04:00Continuity was... not my strong point here. Maybe ...Continuity was... not my strong point here. Maybe they live in a weird area of the world where it abruptly gets dark from like noon to three, and then it's light again until later that night?Hannah Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00849529277859991156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8450543349448165337.post-82710085204277849562014-08-08T13:20:15.615-04:002014-08-08T13:20:15.615-04:00I'm confused by the timeline.
She calls Dax ...I'm confused by the timeline. <br /><br />She calls Dax early in the morning. They talk for a couple of hours. He goes back home, "the street lamps lighting his way". She immediately takes a nap. It is the middle of the afternoon. When she wakes, it is daylight "again", but really it's evening of the same day. <br /><br />I guess it's the streetlamps that confuse me most. Kevinhttp://musingoutloud.comnoreply@blogger.com